in the pool that was my life

In the pool that was my life

I became a stone
sinking to the quiet bottom
where I nestled among other
stationary things that had
collected over years

I still feel remnants of the
comforting moss
that learned to grow
in my crevices along
margins in
stillness

—Karen Haley


JUDGE’S COMMENTS:
Poem is crisp. Language flows. The whole moves toward a transformation at the end.  Ending stays with us.